diff --git a/views/email/newuser_password.erb b/views/email/newuser_password.erb
index 0ac8d27108792a29263ad4aac5cc3f4b1ef58a52..e5608c243655bec26b2e17cdce3e72823d5eac1c 100644
--- a/views/email/newuser_password.erb
+++ b/views/email/newuser_password.erb
@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
 Hi,
 
-Here is your password: <%= password %>
+This is your password: <%= password %>
 
-This is a single-use password, you will automatically be asked to
-set a new password when logging in.
+It is a single-use password. You will automatically be asked to
+set a new password when you log in.
 
 Kind regards,
 Cool Fire